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I am trying to change up some things about the second attempt with this pic.
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Thanks a ton.
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~purplerose Jan 18, 2010   Photographer
Hey, this one has better contrast and a much stronger emotional factor. I think the composition could be stronger if it was off-centered.

Hope this helps! :)
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Really. Off center? Tell me why. Im curious.
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~purplerose Jan 18, 2010   Photographer
I think more negative space to the left or right would help the concept and the story.
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